Ca Bar Exam Essay Tips

People fail the bar exam because they don’t finish the essays. They spend so much time on an early essay that they can’t write the later essays. Or they work on all of the essays, but without finishing some or all of them. Either way, these bar candidates are writing too slowly, and it costs them their ticket to a law license. Change what you do, and you can finish the essays and your tasks on the Multistate Performance Test (MPT) or the California Performance Test (PT), perhaps even with time to spare.

Here is how to write the bar exam essays faster.

  1. Use the time allotted as a guidance for your structure. Write down what time you will start each essay and what time you will finish. Most state bar exams allow you 20, 30, 45 or 60 minutes for each essay. Find out how much time your state allows. Always be conscious of time. Develop a sense of urgency. Write down what time you will start and finish each paragraph. Most paragraphs will take between six and eight minutes, depending on the length of the essay.
  2. Always use principles of law to make your outline. You must read each fact pattern two or three times while you outline—not reading carefully is no way to save time. Outline based on the rules of law and, where applicable, by plaintiff-defendant pairs. You may change your mind about your conclusions while you are working on the essay. As Scott Turow says in One-L, a fact pattern can seem to go through “Merlin-like changes” as you work. But you won’t change your mind about whether answering that essay question requires applying the UCC Statute of Frauds. Circle key facts in the fact pattern if you must, but don’t try writing the facts into your outline. Focus on the law. Then you can apply it to the facts as you draft your essay.
  3. Once you have your outline ready, think the essay through quickly, and then start writing. One bar candidate who came to me complaining about never finishing the bar exam essays turned out to be taking an extra five minutes to make a list of all the facts before he started writing. Don’t do that. Don’t stew in your outline, don’t fester, don’t rewrite your outline or make new notes or rewrite the facts. Just start! Slow writers are usually writers who stall at the beginning. Train yourself to start fast.
  4. Treat each paragraph as a separate timed task, like a short-answer question. Mentally plan how to prove your points, using law and facts, within the time you have available for each paragraph. Decide in your head how you will prove your points, checking to make sure that you can write down your ideas in time. Then work your plan. Constantly check to make sure you are on time. You are not being paid by the word, like Dickens. Do not keep desperately trying to give the bar examiners every suggestion they might conceivably reward. Your job is just to be professional and to start and finish on time.
  5. Before the exam, train yourself to write concisely. Then use your self-editing skills on the bar exam. American legal writing is more like Hemingway than like Melville. Everything is active voice, not passive voice. Write:  The murderer shot the victim, not: The victim was shot by the murderer. Use few or no modifiers. Write: The murderer shot the victim, not: The cruel murderer shot the helpless victim. Practice making your writing and your thinking concise. Figure out how to paraphrase the newspaper reports you read. Figure out how to summarize case holdings in a few words. Make it a game. Practice outlining and writing old bar exam essays, always keeping track of the time, using a stopwatch or a kitchen timer.

When it comes to passing the bar exam, writing concisely is second only to knowing the law and applying it.

Originally published 2012-06-05.

Last updated October 13th, 2017.

Read the next post in this series: "Tips for Finishing the Bar Exam Performance Test on Time."

Nationwide, bar examinations are getting tougher. There’s no doubt about it. And for many years now, the hardest to pass in the U.S. has been in California Bar Exam. That may be even more the case in 2015, with the addition of new subjects and the revision of several others.

So, should you think about taking a different exam? Not at all! The California Bar Exam can be successfully managed. Here are a few simple tips that will help you prepare for—and pass—the California Bar.

1. Start Early One of the biggest mistakes you can make is waiting too long to begin. This test is both state-specific and wildly general. As a result, you’ll need to master the arcane California distinctions in subjects like community property and procedure—and this takes time. Starting six weeks before the test and trying to cram (what I call “binge studying”) is a recipe for disaster. The better strategy? Start four to six months before the test and study 20 to 25 hours per week during that time. You’ll learn more and retain more information with spaced learning—and you’ll still have a life!

2. Learn to speak “Californian” Many California bar takers are successful attorneys from other states and countries who are surprised when they don’t pass the test here. Why do they fail? A major factor is that they try to use the approach and law they learned in their old state rather than writing for the California exam. This is a jurisdiction that prides itself on writing difficult essay and performance test questions and then grades very narrowly to punish the rule-memorizers and issue-spotters. The bottom line? Make good arguments and support them with the rule of law—and don’t try to elaborate on every marginal, irrelevant issue that you see. It just won’t work here.

3. Don’t Overlook the Performance Tests The structure of the California Bar Exam is pretty standard, but the scoring is anything but transparent. One (intended?) result is that applicants often misunderstand what they have to do to pass and consequently don’t spend enough time on the California Performance Test questions. These two tests (designed to replicate a pragmatic, real-world legal task like writing a legal memorandum or client letter) each last three hours (double the time of the Multistate Performance Test). The secret here? Practice. And write (in substance and in tone) in a way that shows an awareness of your audience.

4. Be Prepared for the New Subjects Any time a jurisdiction adds new subjects to its exam, there is uncertainty and anxiety. In February 2015, the Multistate Bar Exam added a seventh topic: federal jurisdiction and civil procedure. This follows the move in California to convert the subjects of professional responsibility, evidence and civil procedure to California-specific subjects.  You’ll need to know both the multistate and California law in these subjects.

5. Use a Laptop There are many bar takers who still prefer to handwrite their answers. Perhaps they are afraid that something may malfunction with their computer during the exam, or are otherwise computer-phobic. However, we see a significant improvement in pass rate among those who use a laptop versus those who handwrite their answers. There are a couple of simple, pragmatic reasons why. First, we’ve found that exam takers who type their answers on a laptop are able to produce 500 more words on average over a 60-minute period than those who write their responses—a significant advantage considering the given time constraints. Second, by using a laptop, you’ll have far more flexibility to edit or restructure your answers, allowing you to organize and re-organize your thoughts more effectively.

6. The Night Before: Sleep, But Don’t Oversleep Bar exam hotels are notorious for being populated with extremely anxious people running up and down the halls late at night, knocking on doors asking for flashcards, that sort of thing. You’ll want to remove yourself from that as much as possible. A white noise machine is a great help. Also, have a trusted friend or family member call you in the morning as a back-up alarm. That way you won’t sleep through your alarm—or stay up all night worrying that you’ll sleep through your alarm.

7. Warm Up! Wake up 45 minutes earlier than you need to and use the time to do five to ten multiple choice questions. This gives you a chance to warm up your brain and get into test mode before you head to the test center.

8. Pack your Ear Buds Bring along a pair of iPod ear buds (you can forget about the iPod itself) and put them in once you get to the test center and are waiting to be admitted. Stick the cord in your pocket. This ruse allows you to avoid the unpleasantness of having to talk to—and feed off the neuroses of—other stressed-out test-takers. Use them again over breaks to shield yourself from the dreaded “post-mortem” conversations that invariably take place and that serve no purpose other than to create unnecessary anxiety.

9. Sequester Yourself As mentioned above, you’ll want to avoid post-mortem discussions like the plague. Have dinner by yourself, away from the hotel and other bar-takers. Even dining with friends and family can result in a deconstruction of the entire day which will serve only to add stress and anxiety. Go somewhere by yourself. Consider the bar exam to be three days of solitude, a (mentally taxing) retreat. It’s a time to be self-absorbed. Everything short of death and apocalyptic destruction can wait until Friday, so put everything aside and resist the urge to multi-task.

10. Avoid Sugar- and Carb-Heavy Meals Forego the stack of pancakes or plate of French toast for breakfast. Going heavy on sugars and carbohydrates can lead to energy spikes (and precipitous drops) or mental lethargy. Instead, have some Greek yogurt and a little granola and fruit (bananas are an excellent choice), or you can even order a serving of eggs and spinach. For lunch, have a hardy salad that includes some protein. You want to give yourself every edge you can, and eating for performance is an undervalued advantage.

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The founder of Celebration Bar Exam Review, Jackson Mumey is an honors graduate of Georgetown University Law Center, where became a senior teaching fellow. He passed the bar exam in 1992 using Celebration Bar Review’s predecessor course materials. He has appeared on brief in several U.S. Supreme Court Cases.

Jackson no longer practices law. Instead, he devotes his full attention and energy to teaching the bar exam and developing innovations in bar preparation course offerings. He has more than 25 years of bar coaching experience and has worked with several thousand bar takers for the Multistate Bar Exam and the exams of California, Florida, Georgia, New Jersey, New York and Texas, in addition to the Uniform Bar Exam and the Multistate Essay Exam.


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