Cornell prompt: How have your interests and related experiences influenced the major you have selected in the College of Agriculture and Life Sciences? (Please limit your response to 650 words.)- Cornell
My Primary Choice College/School:Agriculture and Life Sciences
Anticipated major: Applied Economics and Management(entrepreneurship concentration)
NOTES: Unfortunately, I don't think its unique enough/ too much tell, not much show. Ending could use a bit help. Can anyone help me with my grammer/ word choice as well as edit/ add/ delete anything that seems wrong/ could be better? I didn't want to really name many programs at Cornell business school and how they will help me because it is not part of the prompt. All I did was tell the story of my experiences in business, and why it powered my passion for entrepreneurship, and then wrap it up with saying "Oh how much I love Cornell and what I might do there/ why I would fit" in like a couple sentences. I also wanted to make my identity online confidential.
My interest in applied economics and management, specifically entrepreneurship, started when I was in third grade. I rounded up kids in my neighborhood to create a lemonade stand to raise money for our "toy fund." In middle school, I negotiated with Yu-Gi-Oh card dealers at my local gaming store to sell to the students. When I entered high school, I took my interest in entrepreneurship to a whole new level by creating my own business.
"Borderline obsessive" would be my description for my passion for collecting Legos. Through my hundreds of hours scrolling through online Lego databases and retailers, my ability to recognize any Lego set's manufacturing year, price, and theme on the back of my hand is one of my proudest quirks. After amassing a Lego collection that spread across the basement floor, I had a desire to showcase my work online. With a click of a button, my first YouTube channel was created.
After watching a few Lego videos on YouTube, I was inspired to create videos of my at-the-time meagre Lego collection in order to gain some attention. I realized that for many YouTube Lego fans, it was not the videos about Lego sets that were the most interesting, but the Lego minifigure collections. These minifigures, less than an inch in size, were quite costly and sought after. Sensing an opportunity, I decided to dedicate my freshman year building a business by selling Lego minifigures.
It was at this point that my YouTube channel was not doing so well. After struggling for the first three months due to a lack of video views, I realized that I had to come up with a fresh idea. I put in extra effort by meticulously painting custom Star Wars minifigures to sell and review online. Although painting each minifigure was painstaking work, I was able to gain subscribers and revenue by reviewing each minifigure, and then immediately selling them above their usual price. This process would be the beginning of my prospective career on YouTube.
My interest in business soon matured after my initial success with my custom minifigures. At thirteen, I had no job, and I was ecstatic about my first profit. Realizing that this was what made me tick, I endeavored to increase my video views and sales. Using my negotiating skills, I purchased bulk minifigures far below market price from international distributers on Bricklink and other sites. Working with other YouTube entrepreneurs, my videos on custom minifigures and collections attracted thousands of subscribers and millions of viewers. I have since gained skills regarding setting up a small business and found monetary success over the last four years. What had started out as a summer project has become my pride and passion.
Because of my experiences, I am fascinated by entrepreneurship. Finding business opportunities and ways to tackle problems excites me. My Legos have provided me with the building blocks to my future, developing my business skills and ability to create networks. However, I plan to pass on my torch of business knowledge to the communities that I will belong. This year, I have created my own Entrepreneurship Club at school in order to unify my passion for business and for bettering others by teaching students how to build their own start-ups. Now as walk this path to business, I plan to give back to the community.
At Dyson, the AEM program would provide me an opportunity and environment to pursue my greatest interest. Dyson's AEM program meets everything I have been looking for, such as classes on pre-startup skills to management theory, which would allow me to garner the skills necessary to create and manage a company successfully. I would also be able to work on my start-up while continuing my education. My competitive edge would be stimulated with competitions like the Cornell Venture Challenge and the Big Idea challenge. I look forward to finding the right business team synergizing with them by combining our skills and creating startup companies at the Cornell Entrepreneur Organization. All my experiences, combined with my passion for business, will help me grow as a student at Cornell.
I like the overall of your text.. it is really unique and it certainly has to do with entrepreneurship. However, I agree with grcpark7 when she said that you should talk a little bit more about the major your interested, specifically on this school. If I were you, I would delete some portions of the text bcause even though the story is interesting and unique, you spent a lot of time talking about your entrepreneurship inclination, rather than saying what really makes the College of Arts and Sciences at Cornell University appealing to you. I would expand on the (HOW CAN/ SHOULD I ADD ANY OF THIS) paragraph and link sprinkle more of your actual specific major in the paragraphs. I would focus on WHY Cornell, rather than spend the whole essay talking about your fascination for Legos and your youtube channel! It is a great topic to talk about and an awesome way to catch the reader's attention, but keep in mind that whoever reads your application will be looking for your interest at Cornell, specifically...
great job and I hope this helps
Cornell University is the largest school in the Ivy League and offers a huge range of academic programs. Interested in applying?
Located in Ithaca, NY, Cornell University is known for its diverse academic programs and cold weather in upstate NY. Before you think about putting Cornell down on your college list, make sure it really is the best fit for you.
Think you’d thrive in Cornell’s community and environment? Next, you need to decide which undergraduate college or school you want to apply to. It might be difficult to decide immediately what you want to major in, and you might change your mind after you enrolling, but there has to be something you are interested in studying! Here are the 8 undergraduate college or school you can apply to:
College of Agriculture and Life Sciences
College of Architecture, Art and Planning
College of Arts and Sciences
Cornell SC College of Business: Dyson School of Applied Economics and Management
Cornell SC College of Business: School of Hotel Administration
School of Industrial and Labor Relations
Cornell University’s application only asks for one additional supplemental essay: Why are you interested in studying at Cornell University? Each undergraduate college/school has a specific question you need to answer. The response is limited to 650 words.
So, choose your undergraduate college or school at Cornell and find the essay prompt you need to respond to below:
College of Agriculture and Life Sciences
Why are you drawn to studying the major you have selected? Please discuss how your interests and related experiences have influenced your choice. Specifically, how will an education from the College of Agriculture and Life Sciences (CALS) and Cornell University help you achieve your academic goals?
Sakilan - Accepted to Cornell University ‘19
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College of Architecture, Art, and Planning
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Cornell SC Johnson College of Business: Charles H. Dyson School of Applied Economics and Management
How have your interests and experiences influenced your decision to study Applied Economics and Management? Describe how you would take advantage of the Dyson School’s unique opportunities, for example, its affiliation with both the Cornell SC Johnson College of Business and the College of Agriculture and Life Sciences.
Andrew.b - Cornell University ‘18
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Cornell SC Johnson College of Business: School of Hotel Administration
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I am an anomaly among my peers. While many of them wrestle with the uncertainty of not knowing what they want to do or be in the future, I have always known. Even in elementary school, when the popular options were superhero or sports legend, I had altogether different aspirations. If you had asked me then, my answer would be the same as it is today: I want to work in the hospitality industry. Unlock his full successful Cornell application file.
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